Place:At the Beach,France
Time:Daytime
Season:Summer
2.Summary
The story of Jerry a young English boy and his mother are vocational at the beach,they have come to many times in past years,each try to please the other and not to impose too many demands.
The mother who is a widowed is neither possessive nor lacking in devotion.One of the beautiful day Jerry and his mother went to the beach although it was crowded,he leave the crowded safe beach were he has always played ,Jerry saw some boys strip off their clothes and went running down the rocks he swam towards them, while keeping a distance one of the boy swam in and does not come on the surface for some minutes.
3.Main Character]
Jerry:An eleven years old English boy
Good swimmer
He was Aa determined boy
A foreigner
The older boys never likes him because he was childish
my dearest Fudheni i will give you 6 out of ten becuse:you wrote the plot less than ten to fifteen and secondly you wrote the charater in the form of points and not sentences
ReplyDeletemy dearest Fudheni i will give you 6 out of ten becuse:you wrote the plot less than ten to fifteen and secondly you wrote the charater in the form of points and not sentences
ReplyDeletehi fudheni , i got your work it was well done 7/10 because on th dscrptn of th main character you dd nt follw th instrctn tou were tld to dscrb bt nt to mention as you did
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